The Mother's Last Moments
Ever wondered what goes through a parent's mind when their child leaves for something dangerous? Weir captures this perfectly through domestic imagery and subtle war references. The mother pins a poppy to her son's lapel three days before Armistice Sunday, immediately linking personal loss with national mourning.
The sewing imagery runs throughout - "crimped petals," "bias binding," and "Sellotape bandaged" - showing how the mother clings to familiar, nurturing activities. These domestic details make her feel real and relatable. She desperately wants to be affectionate ("graze my nose across the tip of your nose") but holds back, showing the painful restraint parents feel when children grow up.
Memory and nostalgia flood the poem as she remembers "playing Eskimos" when he was little. The metaphor of words becoming "felt" suggests her emotions are literally choking her. She must be "brave" - a word that echoes military courage but here describes maternal strength.
Quick Tip: Notice how Weir uses enjambment (lines running over) to mirror the mother's flowing, uncontrolled thoughts and emotions.