Creating Tone Through Word Choice
The words we pick can completely change how a message feels! Take "persistent" and "relentless" - both mean pursuing goals with commitment, but "persistent" sounds determined while "relentless" can sound aggressive or negative.
Check out how changing a few words transforms this passage about an abandoned house! Words like "vacant," "abandoned," "disrepair," and "run-down" create a negative, sad tone. But replacing them with "at peace," "freed," "neglect," and "beautiful" makes the same house sound almost magical!
Figurative language also creates tone. Personification gives human traits to non-human things. Metaphors say one thing IS something else. Similes compare things using "like" or "as." Hyperbole uses exaggeration for effect.
Word Power! The wind "stalked" (threatening) vs. "danced with" (playful) shows how personification drastically changes the feeling of a sentence. You can create any mood you want just by choosing the right words!