Simon Armitage's "Remains"
This section explores Simon Armitage's poem "Remains", which examines the effects of PTSD on soldiers returning from war.
Context: Armitage, an English poet, playwright, and novelist, seeks to understand the mentality of British soldiers after returning from wars overseas.
The poem describes a group of soldiers who shoot a man running away from a bank raid and explores the traumatic flashbacks they experience upon returning home. It conveys feelings of nonchalance, guilt, and panic.
"Remains" compares well with poems like "War Photographer", "Poppies", "Bayonet Charge", and "Exposure".
Key literary techniques analyzed include:
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Colloquial language: Phrases like "carted off in the back of a lorry" use casual language to distance readers from the brutality of war, highlighting how soldiers have been numbed by their actions.
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Sound devices: The use of monosyllabic words, alliteration, and plosive sounds in lines like "rips through his life" emphasizes the violence and aggression of the killing.
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Repetition and volta: The repetition reflects how the events of the killing are repeating endlessly in the soldier's mind, emphasizing his inability to forget.
Quote: "He's here in my head when I close my eyes, / dug in behind enemy lines"
This powerful imagery illustrates how the memory of the killing haunts the soldier, becoming an inescapable part of his psyche.