Stanza 4: The End of Innocence
The final stanza of "In Mrs Tilscher's Class" marks a definitive shift, signaling the end of childhood innocence and the onset of adolescence. This section of the poem analysis examines how Duffy uses vivid imagery and symbolism to convey this transformation.
Quote: "You ran through the gates, impatient to be grown, as the sky split open into a thunderstorm."
This powerful opening line encapsulates the theme of the entire poem - the eager rush towards adulthood, despite the turbulence it may bring. The metaphor of the thunderstorm brilliantly represents the emotional and physical changes of puberty.
Duffy's use of sensory imagery reaches its peak in this stanza:
- Visual: "The sky split open"
- Tactile: "The air tasted of electricity"
- Olfactory: "A tangible sexual thunder"
Highlight: The repetition of "The air tasted of electricity" from the previous stanza creates a sense of building tension and excitement.
The poem's tone shifts dramatically in this final stanza:
Example: "Mrs Tilscher smelled of chalk and mothballs, sentences stacked in the air like building blocks."
This description of Mrs Tilscher now feels static and outdated, contrasting sharply with the dynamic, charged atmosphere outside the classroom. It suggests that the narrator has outgrown the safe, structured environment of primary school.
Literary Device: Symbolism - The thunderstorm serves as a powerful symbol for the tumultuous nature of puberty and the transition to adolescence.
The final lines of the poem are particularly striking:
Quote: "You asked her how you were born and Mrs Tilscher smiled, then turned away. Reports were handed out. You ran through the gates, impatient to be grown, as the sky split open into a thunderstorm."
This sequence of events perfectly captures the moment of transition. The question about birth represents newfound curiosity about adult topics, while Mrs Tilscher's reaction symbolizes the end of the protective teacher-student relationship. The handed-out reports mark the end of the school year, and the rush through the gates represents the eager embrace of the next phase of life.
Themes: The key themes of growing up, loss of innocence, and the passage of time all culminate in this final, powerful stanza of "In Mrs Tilscher's Class".